KIa ora After we made our writing skeleton on the planning sheet, we had to highlight all the notes and then copy and paste them below in a list one after the other. So, our story skeleton looks like it can stand up now but it is still just bones. Our teacher says writers call this an outline. We read our outlines out loud to each other and they sound good.Here is mine below.
30 March 2016
Yay where going to the speedway
The engines were so hot as a walking hot lion
On the weekend
My Uncle and me and my anunty
At the speedway
Watch racing
tired
First we watched the super saloons then later that night we did the awards then i went to sleep
Staying the night
driving to the speedway
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