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Friday, 20 May 2016

One-Sided Argument writing. term 2 wk3

Learning Intention:
Title/Topic construction


I can independently think of an issue which I would like to write an argument about, and write a title that would suit it.


Write your title  under here:


Achieved independently


Achieved after support/discussion with teacher


Not achieved


Swearing on youtube should be banned.


Firstly Think of all of the kids that watch youtube and have swearing in it that is bad for kids even little kids.


secondly some people youths to be good but now some people are watching bad videos. On youtube they will turn into bad people. Thats how they get into jail.


Thirdly People like little kids they can just learn the swearing off the big kids or the adults in the fifty,s and sixties And seventies Eighties and nineties they never had youtube so they never seward because  they didn't have anything to swear on and they couldn't put a video onb youtube  but in these  days we have you tube and now people are swearing on it

No swearing on youtube people or you will get into jail

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